How to survive the frozen

One day a man named Adam went on a cruise. Adam was the best survivor and he was a young soldier. he was trying to find another young soldier who was lost in battle. Somehow the rest of  the sea was frozen but on the side was snow and he could see soldiers stuck in the snow then the cruise accidentally crash into the ice. Then the  ship began to sink so Adam  jump onto the ice the he started to slip into the snow then he met another young soldier named Tim. Then they helped the other soldiers ,  after that they made a raft and went home. The end!